Friday, May 3, 2013

"Hide" an alternate ending and missed opportunity, Part 3



Spoilers!

Please beware, I am using original dialogue and plot from the episode “Hide” in season 7 of modern Doctor Who.  I have rearranged things a bit, and added some bits of dialogue, but most of it is intact in some form or another from the episode.  I begin my alternate ending at about thirty minutes in.  I will write some small bit of lead-up, to show the context of my changes, but the rest after that is my engineering or my reproduction of events between my changes.  Enjoy!

This is part 3.  Please see part one here. 
Part 2 here.







“Doctor, can you hear me?” shouted Emma over the sound of the portal.  Of course, there was no harness over there any longer, and the whole mechanism to get him out was a bit in shambles, but the first problem was establishing contact.

Unfortunately, the pocket universe had already shrunk considerably from where it had been when the window had closed, and the Doctor had planted himself right in the middle of the universe to give himself time to think of a way out.  He could hope that Emma might restore herself and try again, but had no guarantees that it would happen.  He jumped when he heard her voice calling out to him, but it was even fainter than before, and the direction was muddled.  He took his best guess and ran.

It seemed he took a wrong turn somewhere because he ended up on a meadow near the edge of the pocket universe, still no sign of the window Emma had made for him.  He stopped and looked around, listening for her voice again to give him some clue where to go, when he saw a familiar figure appear out of the mist above the trees.  It was spinning and nearly out of control, but that was definitely his TARDIS.

With a clear idea of what could happen to her if she stopped and got stuck here, the Doctor braced himself and grabbed on when it came near enough.  He clung for dear life and hoped she had enough sense to go through the psychic wormhole Emma was still helpfully providing because if they went through the vortex with him on the outside....

As they landed on the other side of the wormhole, the Doctor leaned against the side of the TARDIS to the sound of Emma screaming from the effort.  Clara opened the door as he came around the corner, her mouth open that she had actually somehow managed to pull that off, not to mention at the sight of Emma on her knees and gasping for air.  An exhausted Doctor gave her a high five on his way to check on Emma, though.

Assured that she was just strained, and would recover just fine, he straightened up to look at the emerging sunlight out the window.  The tension and fear of nearly being trapped in a universe that was collapsing around him worked its way out in a small smile and a soft chuckle.

Then, Clara remembered.  “Doctor!”  She seized his sleeve and spun him around to face her half-glowering, half-frightened face.  “Why did that monster get through before?”

“Monst—Oh!”  He smacked himself on the forehead again.  “I thought I had a little longer, and that I would come through after it.  I’m sorry.”  He put a hand to her shoulder briefly, then turned in a circle, peering in the corners of the room.  “Where did he go?”

Clara looked at the doorway, still half closed with the rope hanging from it.  “Ran off that way.  I’m not sure why it just ran off so fast, though....  But then the wormhole closed, and I was just thinking about getting you back....”  She realized that through the whole thing, after the monster left, she hadn’t been afraid of it once.  Until just now, but it was a much quieter fear.  More worry than anything.  Now Hilla and Alec were looking at the door nervously, too, though Emma was far too exhausted to think of anything else.

“Ah, well, I’m sure he can figure it out.”

“What are you talking about?” Clara asked, stepping up so he couldn’t avoid her question.

“How do sharks have babies?” he asked instead of answering.

“...Carefully?”

“No!  No, no, no.  Happily.”

Clara frowned at him.  “Sharks don’t actually smile.  They just, well, they’ve got lots and lots of teeth.  They’re quite eaty.”

“Exactly!  But birds do it, bees do it.  Even educated fleas do it.”  He threw an arm around Clara on one side, and Alec around the other.  He smiled at the half-closed door where the monster had disappeared through.  “Every lonely monster needs a companion.”

“...There’s two of them?!” Clara demanded. 

“It’s the oldest story in the universe.  This one, or any other.  Boy and girl fall in love, they are separated by events, war, politics, accidents in time.  She’s thrown out of the hex, or he’s thrown into it.  Since then, they’ve been yearning for each other across time and space, across dimensions.  This isn’t a ghost story.  It’s a love story!”  He looked first at Clara, then at Alec, then at his arms around their shoulders and let go.  “Sorry.”

***

The Doctor stepped away into a corridor and leaned against a window frame.  He folded his arms, frowning to himself.  Emma strolled up behind him.  “You wanted a word?”

“Well, if that’s—”

“It’s fine.”  She smiled at him when he faced her.  “You didn’t come here for the ghost, did you?”

He smiled back.  “No.”

“You came here for me.”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

“I needed to ask you something.”

“Then ask.”

“Clara.”

“...Yes?”

The Doctor stepped up close, peering into Emma’s eyes carefully to get as much information as possible out of what she was going to say.  “What is she?”

Emma smiled uncertainly, not knowing what to make of the question.  “She’s a girl.”

He didn’t so much as crack a smile, now.  “Yes, but what kind of girl specifically?”

“...She’s a perfectly ordinary girl.”  Silence for a moment, as she looked at the Doctor and tried to figure out what he wanted.  “Very pretty.”  He laughed a little and turned away, no longer sure he’d get anything useful from the psychic.  “Very clever.”  He nodded agreement to that one.  “More scared than she lets on.”

Several paces away now, back to Emma, arms crossed, the Doctor pushed once again.  “And that’s it, is it?”

“Why?” Emma demanded.  “Is that not enough?”

***

They all walked the Doctor and Clara out to the TARDIS in the morning sunshine.  Hilla and Emma embraced.  The Doctor threw his arms around both of them, pleased with the happiness after all the tension and fear during the night.  “Where will you go?” Emma asked Hilla.

“He can’t take me home,” she explained.  “History says I went missing.”  The Doctor nodded along.

“But he can change history,” Emma suggested.

“No, no no, I can’t actually.  There are fixed points in time, you see.”  Clara popped up next to him as he was about to launch into an explanation, glomming onto his arm.  “What?”

“Hi,” she whispered, but just dragged the Doctor away with her, to let the two women talk. 

“I knew you were there,” Hilla told Emma.  “I could feel you.  I knew.”  They smiled at each other.

The Doctor tried to rejoin them, but Clara held on.

“...Have we...?”

“We can’t have,” Emma answered, though she was thinking the same.  “You haven’t even been born yet.”

Finally, he pulled away from Clara because this time, he absolutely had to speak up.  “No, you can’t have met, but she can be your great-great-great-great-great-granddaughter.”  He had to do some math in his head as he counted out the ‘greats’.  “Eh?  Yours, too, of course,” he said to Alec as the major walked up.  “But you guessed that, already, didn’t you?” he asked Emma, not noticing the baffled looks he was getting from the couple who had not yet gotten together.  At least not until he’d finished speaking.  He looked between the three people staring at him.  “...Oh.  Apparently not.”

“...But the paradoxes—” Alec started to protest.

“Resolve themselves, by and large, that’s why the psychic link was so powerful.  Blood calling to blood.  Not everything ends, eh?  Not love.  Not always.”

“Doctor,” Alec called as he chased after the retreating Doctor.  “What about—what about us?  Emma and me....”

“...What about you?”

“Well, what’s supposed to happen?  I mean, what do we do now?”

Emma was standing beside Alec, now, and the pressure was on the Doctor to say something helpful, though he was rather terrible at doing that on purpose.  Accidentally romantic things, he could do.  Simplicity, that’s what he had to go with.  “Hold hands,” he said to them.  “That’s what you’re meant to do.  Keep doing that, and don’t let go.  That’s the secret.  Eh?”  He looked up through the window to see two knobby heads peeking out of it. 

Then, he jumped and smacked his forehead.  “Oh, stupid!”  He dashed for the house again.

“Doctor?!”  Clara ran after him.  No way was he going to leave again without her. 

“I can’t just leave them here,” he explained over his shoulder.  “I can take them somewhere safe quite easily, now they’re both out of the pocket universe.  I just have to get them to—”  He skidded to a stop as he went careering around a corner, and Clara nearly ran into him.  Once she regained her balance, she looked up to see what the Doctor was already staring at—the alien standing over them, with another one, slightly smaller, behind it.  “—trust me.  Hello.”  No response, though that wasn’t unexpected.  “I can take you somewhere safe.  I got you out of that collapsing universe, yeah?  Trust me.”

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